The Paths To Remembrance

It's very lovely to read and I like the way of storytelling. The characters are so beautifully explained

A harsh review but that's the truth. Author had a promising premise but wasted it by rushing the story from the get go and seemingly brute forcing things like inserting romance very early on. Inconsistencies also started to prop up and judging by how the author just seemingly let it slide, not so promising. Thus, a rather unfortunate wasted potential that was ruined by blatant issues that made it bland, shallow, and forced.Benefit of doubt that the later chapters improved but the early chapters pretty much already crippled the read for me.

Heya, Its me the author of this novel. ummm I dont really know what to say but I hope you enjoy your read and help me through constructive criticism and stuff since this is my first novel... yeah. Thats all I guess thank you for taking the time to read my novel if you do read it. :D

Please do continue to update this novel, I really like it

These patterns aren't so kind towards logic, so King Michael pushed positive thinking away and accepted the upcoming danger. But yet his nervousness was cut in half once recalling the arsenal in this room alone.

Only shooting stars

I could use a little fuel myself

Never questioning why a 15yr old kid would want a job, why she came to them in a shabby dress,  what happened to her.  None.  They never pushed me.  It felt like I was home with them. And what the job was....? Nothing much. A small restaurant. I worked as a chef. I started out with being a waitress. But soon found out that I could cook better than serve.  Even I didn't expect myself to have such a talent.